Me and my grandma went to the pool. At the pool me and my grandma went to the hot tub and the pool. In the hot tub i was wiggling and jumping i was having fun then it was time to go but i had fun.
Me and my grandma went to the pool. At the pool me and my grandma went to the hot tub and the pool. In the hot tub i was wiggling and jumping i was having fun then it was time to go but i had fun.
Great job focusing on one small moment!